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Old 12-27-2011
cynthiam cynthiam is offline
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The expansion seems like scope creep to me and a bit prescriptive (not in a good way). I agree with Janos that it may dilute your original message.

How are you defining healthy choices and living well? It sounds to me too much like how every health "authority" tries to push his/her pet idea.
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